Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Stormy Day Narrative

Hearing a loud crashing  sound outside my window, I rushed outside to see what had happened. To my surprise I saw that a seagull had smashed onto the glass. Struggling to walk out onto the sand, I could feel the wind pushing against me. The “roar” of it and the waves pounding the shore is all I can hear.

I turned my head to look back at my house, I saw that it was covered in a thick foggy blanket. Suddenly I heard a crack, a tree fell right beside me. The vibrations of the tree when it hit ground, caused me to fall over and run back into the house like a wuss.

With my hands on my mothers shoulders I shook her vigorously trying to wake her up. “WAKE UP!” I yelled in my mothers face surprisingly the howling wind hadn't woken her up already. I looked back outside and saw that a dog was being swallowed by a big blue wave. I ran to try get him back. Stupidly I swam to him and tried to pull him ashore.

It didn't work I was stuck in the rip! Up in the air the dog flew onto the beach. I had thrown him so he wasn't dead wait. I felt like I was being pulled out to sea. The more I started to drift off the more it felt like my heart was going to pop out of my chest.

Suddenly the current stopped. I couldn't believe it I was so scared. The mist was all around me. Am I dead? I thought to myself. No I couldn't my heart was still pounding. I panicked and started kicking I hurt my foot as I felt a rock scrap against it. I could feel the blood oozing out of my foot.  It looked disgusting.

The mist started to clear up I was so scared and happy at the same time. I wanted to know where I was. I was so stupid. All that panicking for nothing. 10 meters from the shore was all that there was.

The storm had finally cleared up. Tree debris was everywhere it looked like a mini tornado had hit. I ran inside the house everything was as it was before.”What!” mum was still sleeping! what had happened here?

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