The proud athlete stood victoriously on the podium, thrilled with her amazing win.
As she holds her great gold medal in one hand and a bouquet in the other, she smiles gleefully into the camera.
Looking very pleased with herself, she smiles gleefully into the camera.
The audience applauded the asian athlete as she stood on the podium with a gold medal around her neck.
Feeling like a champion she looks at the crowd with her victory in mind.
As she holds her great gold medal in one hand and a bouquet in the other, she smiles gleefully into the camera.
Looking very pleased with herself, she smiles gleefully into the camera.
The audience applauded the asian athlete as she stood on the podium with a gold medal around her neck.
Feeling like a champion she looks at the crowd with her victory in mind.
Hello Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteThis post is very complex. It has a lot of different beginnings and has a lot of interesting vocab. All of these sentences were so great I couldn't think of anything to help you improve it. The only thing I would of liked to see was a picture of the Asian girl. Other then that, your writing was awesome. I can't wait to read more interesting post. Keep up the great work!!!
Vivienne