Thursday, February 9, 2012

Powhiri For A Prince


Powhiri For The Prince is all about a girl who gets ready for Prince Edwards arrival in rotorua but the influenza came and heaps of people caught it. The little girls house had to be turned into a hospital and the rotorua trip got cancelled and she was really looking forward to it. But when the influenza was gone, they had an unexpected surprise. The prince was coming to lyttleton where they lived.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Brooklyn
    I like your post about Powhiri for Prince.I also like your interesting vocab. But this sentence I think needs a little bit of fixing up: The little girls house had to be turned into a hospital and the rotorua trip got cancelled and she was really looking forward to it.
    But when the influenza was gone, they had an unexpected surprise. Apart for that you writing was good.
    Keep it up
    Ashleigh

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  2. Hello Brooklyn,
    I love your post about Powhiri for Prince. I also like your picture you added with it, Keep up the great work in class.

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