Wednesday, May 29, 2013

My Narrative Paragraph

Running through the forest further and further away from the alliance training camp a group of  friends end up in a misty clearing with twelve strange rocks placed in a circle. “What is this all about Sue?”, said Roimata. Roimata was Sue’s annoying little sister. “ I really don’t know but let’s sleep here for the night okay”, She replied.  “This doesn't feel right”,  Ashliegh yelled out to the others.  Ashliegh was Sue’s friend which they met at the training camp. Lying down ready to go the to sleep the girls hear strange whispers coming from the bushes. “What was that?”, Roimata said jumping up in fright. They huddled together in a circle looking around for any unusual activity then suddenly.....

1 comment:

  1. Hi Brooklyn,
    I like this post of yours. It is very complicated in it's ways. But their are some things you may need to tweak. Keep up the great work though.

    Yours Sincerely,


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